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Krawdad
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0 posted 2006-08-21 06:23 PM


  
             It is not

                  that I do not think about you

                     every day

                        you know that I do

                but some days it hurts

                   in such a way that

                      it speaks no words

                         that I can understand

                and so

                   I cannot write.
  





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MGROVES
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1 posted 2006-08-21 06:33 PM


written and heard-

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2006-08-21 07:10 PM


Nice...I have someone that I don't want to think of everyday, because of the thoughts it creates...James
nick_lyss
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3 posted 2006-08-21 07:13 PM


i liked your poem it was good thats how i am too

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Gaia
4 posted 2006-08-21 07:22 PM


silent moments
are not always
golden

The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-08-21 09:21 PM



this one broke my heart
Krawdad
it's so good...

1slick_lady
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6 posted 2006-08-22 07:02 AM


i
know

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2006-08-22 07:10 AM



Yes, Sir...


Earth Angel
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8 posted 2006-08-22 07:29 AM


My heart heard your words...


EA

LeeJ
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9 posted 2006-08-22 08:56 AM


amen....lovely
Magnus
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10 posted 2006-08-22 08:01 PM


Krawdad,  

I do understand, very well indeed but I doubt
I could have said it as well as your words
have described your feelings.

dgvarner
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11 posted 2006-12-03 02:20 PM


Yes..I get this...

Peace to you...
hugs, g

"Home..is for free expression, not for good impression..."

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