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Yea though I walk....
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Yea though I walk.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Hours walk a lonely trek, in wait of that which a messenger brings...the darkened cloak hanging loosely upon a shadowed face. The time is nigh, a whisper says, the miles have come and are now gone. The walk once stepped now over....you lie quietly in wait. A wish is left upon the bed, in hopes that all might know....that even though he comes and treads....we know that you must go. So, take the dawn and feel the light, let no one stand in thy way, for you gave but a gallant fight..and...though you leave... A memory will stay.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, And a good one I hope. Good write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This deserves to go back to the top! Well done  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Beautiful! We can help our loved ones live on by propelling their good and remembering the beauty they brought into life. You said it perfectly! Rae |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
So painfully beautiful. This is one of two works I have read here that simply rock me to the bone. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
You are writing on my heart with this one Magnus. I wait for vision clearing... and if I knew how to leave a peace rose for you here, I would.  ~ Karen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Helping out a Klassy Lassy... because I would have done the same thing. Excellent work, Barry. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Oh! Sunshine...you know when someone is looking through tears they often see rainbows? Thank you. Barry, from us both!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, thanx for all your words....and Shining One, thank you for the beautiful rose. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Touching and so beautiful, Barry. |
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