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Open Poetry #38

Setting Me Free

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-08-20 09:35 AM

I'm holding on to nothing
Staring into space
Tell me, Nick, is there something
In my dreams fruaght with your face?

I'm tired of hanging on to nothing
Yet I cant seem to let go.
Emotions changing fast
Yet time seems going slow

Tell me, Nick, is there anything
I could do to make us be?
Is there such a possibility
Of you setting me free?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-08-20 10:52 AM

Sprite~
Holding on to letting go
is so very hard, you see
Just take the plunge of release
for the fall will be breathtaking~
And ... often ones' heart finds a new
and softer landing place~

Good emote in your penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2006-08-20 12:48 PM

Sprite - yes, Marge gives good advice and you will know when you are ready to go in search of a soft landing place.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2006-08-20 12:59 PM

Seems that the question's answer lies some
where in the future...Here's hope you get
what you wish.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

4 posted 2006-08-20 03:51 PM

thanks bunches!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-08-21 12:04 PM

Only you can set yourself free...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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