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The Garden |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Garden There is a garden in my mind A place of pardon that I find Where snow white doves can rest in place Within the magic of its grace A field where souls can come to rest A field where mostly lovers nest A place where rainbows start their climb And arch their arch o’er sands of time Where wind chimes play within the sky And colored clouds float gently by Where dew drops glisten in the light And fireflies light up the night Some people call it Shangri- la It’s just beyond the mist not far Just close your eyes and wish the thought Forget the things that you were taught This place of pardon you can find Go see the garden of your mind |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How wonderful to have a place like that to retreat to. Delightful poetry. Joyce |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Ah The Garden of Mind I am particularly fond of the spot where little "Larry" grows. ::smiles:: The Sy blossoms are wonderful also. Wonderful write! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Most surreal and special is this wondrous place you have taken us through your poetic powers. God bless and thank you for sharing. -Bob |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sort of an inner Utopia....or perhaps a place where Peter Pan resides...a tranquil and peaceful spot, huh? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Joyce Thank you for the read and reply. Uriah It takes a little doing to get visitation rights. LOL Bob My pleasure and thank you for the reply. Barry, Like I said to Uriah, it takes a little doing but it's worth the effort. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mine seems to be overgrown with weeds... may I rest in yours for a while? *S* Beautiful!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You susrely may.  |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
"A field where souls can come to rest A field where mostly lovers nest A place where rainbows start their climb And arch their arch o’er sands of time" Exquisite! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful, Sy  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
seraphin Love your replies. Interloper Thank you, thank you. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! Can I come visit your garden. Sounds like such a serene place to be. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Any time, any time. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
if I visit your garden will you give me a few seeds for mine? Sir Sy this is lovely and quiets the mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady You are more than welcome. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The view of your mind-garden is spectacular~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Said the spider to the fly. LOL  |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
A garden of rainbows, aplace to stay awhile, and sleep the night tears away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neotec Yes that is the place. |
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