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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
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TENN

0 posted 2006-08-18 12:12 PM


clink-clink-clink
goes the emotional rollercoaster,
taking me to the top just to drop me down again.
throws me threw some loops
and jerks me around corners.
everyone's screaming and i cant hear myself.

And now, as soon as it slows,
it gets thrown in reverse
and now im goin in blind.

back through the loops and back to the bottom.
only thing different, is the view.
view: different person, different treason.
different positions, different reasons.

but hey! now im back at the top!.
back to the point right before i dropped.
but now the chain caught and im goin back to the first stop.
time to get off and let someone else on.
cant stay forever i guess.
time to get in another line...
and wait.

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

© Copyright 2006 Jamison - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-08-18 12:34 PM


enjoyable read, though I'll pass on that ride
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