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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I would hold you that you might cry. I would whisper, that you might hear the still winds that lightly touch a face of beauty. I would give a king’s ransom that I might once know you to the deepest depth of your sea. I would stand at the water’s edge that I might feel the wave that once touched your feet. I would carry your burden that you might rest in peaceful slumber, letting dreams dance through your head....stirring the eyes, wrinkling a nose, widening a smile that entrances me. I would, all of this and more, for you are a star high above as the glow of our moon shines before us and friendships bond us together.... Always... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You express such wonderful qualities in your write, as it takes a special friend to know such. TD |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A beautiful, tender, and touching write! Makes me wonder what the world would be like if we all could do what we would. Helen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Awww .. and I believe ever word of it~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry so very..."always"...such is love! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well Writ! I love it! More! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An always that carries this much weight to lift that much burden is an always welcome.... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Oh my. You have painted a dream. Absolutely lovely. Sandra |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem is both picturesque and heart warming. Enjoyed reading. -Bob |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..Always.. You just keep getting better Barry. Do you hear the huge Canadian sighs?  Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, how beautiful. It's almost as though our two poems belong together, Each is a response to the other. You create beautiful images Liz |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
It must be something in the air... contagious, I hope. Strong and tender, Magnus, this truly makes me wistful. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How I'd love to know this loving always. *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Touching .... and you have! feel the ebb to such words ... good to read you again! Ct |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
beautiful as are all your poems. You are a true romantic. martyjo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was, as always beautiful...it's a like a live journey through your words... yanno, my girlfriend lives in Beauford...and, you guys are going to get clobbered with that tropical storm...takecarea you.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, I see your romantic soul is still at work. Nice to see you still writing. I am just visiting, as my muse died. Sandra |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Magnus, I read this a while back and meant to comment on it! You sure know how to sweep someone off her feet! Enjoyed it as much the second reading as the first! misc |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Barry I missed this first time 'round just ...sigh and thanks to miscellanea |
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