Open Poetry #38 |
One Sail, Reefed |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
One Sail, Reefed A sail for you I am while wind roars and the waves would rip you down if I should break and leave you helpless. My very name means torn and tied; I am not swift but I am strong for you. When the wind would shatter your spars, I shed the wind until a bay somewhere looms up to shelter you. Then I become your bay and my name is respite, relief. I hold your anchor firm; But when the storm is gone, your world all blue again and sparkling in the sun, while a morning tide comes flowing strong, then I am harbor still while you raise your lovely spinnaker and sail away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JaimeJaime~ 'when the storm is gone, your world all blue again and sparkling in the sun, while a morning tide comes flowing strong, then I am harbor still while you raise your lovely spinnaker and sail away.' You make wind-words that squeeze this heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very beautifully written!!! misc |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Ah, and you watch her sail away, knowing another blow will come, and you'll be needed. Sigh. You almost make me a romantic. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Almost masterful Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie...The harbor allows safety and freedom...a special kind of love. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
but I am strong for you. When the wind would shatter your spars, I shed the wind until a bay somewhere looms up to shelter you. Then I become your bay and my name is respite, relief. Through storms and sunshine, always there... always offering all you are... So beautiful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Especially through sunshine... |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
Woow can see the sails, and the clouds. nice |
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