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Open Poetry #38

As Roses Wilt

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-08-16 07:21 PM

As Roses Wilt

She had her
own reasons
for leaving.
I thought I knew
what they were.
At one time
I thought I knew
the reasons
I was left.
Now considering
everything, I'm
not so sure.

JamesLee
15August
2006

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2006-08-16 09:44 PM

I understand this well. You did a wonderful job painting the entire picture with a minimum of words.

Sandra

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-08-16 11:06 PM

Nicely done, James.

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

3 posted 2006-08-17 12:24 PM

That was nice JamesMichael, very nice. I have felt this way a few times in my life.

Hugs Kimberly

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2006-08-17 03:48 AM

It always amazes me when I think I know and then I realize how little I do know -- what I thought I understood really is so unclear to me.

I like your poetry a lot.

aziza

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-08-17 05:36 PM

You're a master of short, powerful, sad ones.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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