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Open Poetry #38
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artexeres
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0 posted 2006-08-16 10:45 AM


Thoughts
these bind or vines, that creep to who knows
where
the imagination controlled by the senses
renders
senseless decisions
affecting us in a manner reflected in the mirror
of the soul
encased in prison?
now what do we hope to accomplish
by these procrastinators of our energy
stealers of our time?
This commodity we cling on to
senseless thinking.

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-08-16 10:48 AM

The mind a prison and day dreams wasteful?
I don't know if I agree but I liked the presentation
This would be a great subject for poetic debate

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
artexeres
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2 posted 2006-08-16 05:20 PM

Cool, thank you, for taking the time to read and comment.
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