Open Poetry #38 |
. . . believe in love |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
there were good moments though too few and far between to shore foundation indifference reigns silence screams in agony words fall deaf to ear divorce no option no biblical precedence no authority uncomfortable the soul craves salving presence inconsolable Christ the salvation the emotional outlet remains in the pen but believe in love love is THE reality the greatest of gifts therefore you will love and you will write about love ‘til your pen is stilled Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sigh~ in love's capture until we die |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sad poem. This is why I wrote the two I had to write. Love should be fun, laughter and sharing the good things. best to you, martyjo |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
midnitesun ~ Thanx for the sigh. I could use a hug, too martyjo ~ Sad? Ya think so? Kinda depends how you view it I guess. If it made you think, then I did good Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
swells of space shall never drift apart true hearts that learn to ride love's roughest waves, but shall capsize swiftly when floating foul flotsam and jetsom silent indifference lies heart hugs to you, loper |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
made me think and you did good... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
here is the hope of it: but believe in love love is THE reality the greatest of gifts And within this hope, lies the seed; and His tears will still reap a bounty. Well done, Poet. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Midniteswun ~ Your replies are NOT supposed to be better than my offering ... but I forgive you The Lady ~ Then I did good! Thank you Sunshine ~ As the Tall Texan scuffs his boot toe in the dust he replies, "Thank you, ma'am!" Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Loper~ Believing in love Stretching reaches of the heart In softest surround~ **You inspire others so easily** Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
I loved this piece of poetry thank you, love only searches for its self, and only gives of its self, that is love? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Well now there Tall Texan, I needed to read something just like this today.....Love indeed......nicely written sir. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ How I love Tindal's l'il tidbits artexeres ~ I'm happy you enjoyed Gentle Spirit ~ Thank you ma'am Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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