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cedars after midnight
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cedars after midnight |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Is it about cedars after midnight? their latent bodies flushing copper sheen in moonlight moist dew fingers of hungry stare & heat quietly touching a scarf of summer warmth about their truth for things they were and yet to be coin makers of secret waters everlasting flow growing in the mind of Galilee humid souls Venus takes her bow their musical whispers shall see precise ecstasy implode nightingale’s east breeze kind wide in sea of half shadow collapses down aside long married Persian roses dreaming human sounds now the world light golden bracelets jingle a fragrant expanse manna-dew sentimental leafy quiet moments plucking fulfillment from the air patterns constructed by a mind of lutes fidgets of sap oozing lush swells escaping in an ocean of heaven’s mortality hunger chasing colors of ambition of uncontrollable wanton red blossoms slide down the neck of spiritual deeply wound on bare shoulders thigh mouth and tongue have dared their coat purse of fire crowns paranormal calls passing perfume to the wind becoming molecules of gushing hum song pouring foam of evening gardens heart of cedar drumming poem after midnight bare fluorescence becomes mind of flesh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ They certainly do. Your better than kodacolor. You can develop my film any time. Good morning sweety.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Every time I read this I get a different feeling. ~*~ this thrills the senses even the sixth one is touched conucopia Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Interloper said it very well! Your poem thrills the senses. Once again, fantastic to read your poetry. misc |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh Lee, this is exquisite and shall receive a special shelf within my library thank you, for the essence, for this perfumed poetry and for the inspiration /pip/Forum95/HTML/002603.html |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ I am a sucker for that welcoming mat of a title ... inviting me to enter ... to traipse amongst the talented ink of you~  You do the name ~Poetess~ honor~ *Huglets  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"now the world light golden bracelets jingle a fragrant expanse manna-dew sentimental leafy quiet moments plucking fulfillment from the air patterns constructed by a mind of lutes fidgets of sap oozing lush swells escaping in an ocean of heaven’s mortality"  Loving Light, Linda |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is beautiful. The title drew me and your words did not let me down. aziza |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is several worlds on several planes... all delightfully dripping with a serenely keen sensitivity... wonderful read! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The pure genius of His creation unfolds for minds like yours. One day, one sunset, one garden filled with His beauty, and you have painted it well with your words. A beauty, LJ. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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