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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2006-08-14 05:27 AM


Stop...

I want to run wild,
to run my mouth like a blazing wild fire.
I want to let you know,
that all these things escalate to anger.

Stop...

Ugh! I can't believe it again.
I feel like a welcome mat,
strewn out on the floor.
Worn.
Walked on, over and over again.

Stop...

I want to scream at you,
let you know where I stand.
I hate this feeling right beneath your feet.
Trampled.

Stop...

Wasting my time, money and gas.
Grow up and show a little class.
Be a mother to your daughter.

Ugh! I can't believe these knives,
that are jabbing at my back.
Do you see this shade of red falling to the floor,
beneath your selfish feet.


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Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
1 posted 2006-08-14 05:39 AM


Heaps of frustration coming through this, conveyed the feeling of  “Ugh” profoundly, =)
I too know what it’s like to have an adolescent for a parent,
well, I did anyway.
Joe  

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-08-14 08:52 AM


escaping from a locked trunk can be sugar water

well done, and passionate

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-08-14 08:54 AM


family is the worst sometimes, yeah


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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-08-14 11:22 AM


Ugh, stop!
You write what you feel but do you feel what you write?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
5 posted 2006-08-14 03:13 PM


Its not my family. Its not my mom I am talking about. OMG I would shoot myself if that were my mom OMG. Its my ex-friend who is irresponsible and pisses me off.

She has a 5 yr old. shes 22 and she mooches rides. Orders pizza then when we pick it up says she has no money...WTF. Always wants a ride.... never gives money for gas.... $3.08 a gallon and I usually use half a tank with her in the car....

THEN her daughter tells her she can play with my COLLECTORS barbies.... and I had already told her NO millions and zillions of times.  They ripped the box open and pulled the hair out of the dolls.... GEEZ.

Not to mention leaving my house completely trashed.  Yes I realize that this rant and rave is a bit immature and stupid but some of the things they ruined are irreplaceable and I am hurt and feeling a bit taken advantage of.

Thanks for the sweet replies and encouragements.

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