Open Poetry #38 |
behind the shadows.. |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
My life a clutter Reflecting my heart Where are you amidst all of the pain Why are you hiding behind the shadows Please come out I need you more than anything I don’t need material things I don’t need money to make me happy Your smile Your love Your sweet caresses Your soft lullaby And soft kisses My life upside down Right side up Reflecting my mentality I’m taking care of everyone else But myself Sometimes Love seems impossible I fall victim To the negativity of the past Who will see past this My tears keep me company My dreams comfort me Teasing me of what I do not have Will I be able to make it through Another night Without you will the heartache end? Please do not end up a figment of my imagination Like all the rest Please prove me wrong tonight… If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Questions ~ How can you love another if you don't love yourself? How can you take care of someone else if you can't take care of yourself? How can you respect another if you don't respect yourself? Answers ~ You are a victim if you say you are. Love is impossible if you say it is. Life and love is what you make of it. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, this is good! 'a figment of my imagination' -- sometimes I wonder what is real and if it ought to be. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Ceinwyn, Your poem reminds me of the first part of my life and Interloper's Questions remind me of this half and the realization of a higher power who has protected me along the way. Great Poetry Hugs Kimberly |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
keeping my fingers crossed for ya, wishing you well and good luck. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you must learn to step away from the shadows that don't fit |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
"I don’t need material things I don’t need money to make me happy" ahh, a rare breed these days...lol Nice heart felt writing. =) Joe |
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