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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2006-08-13 12:48 PM

quote:
When you are old and gray and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep

From “When You Are Old” by William Butler Yeats

And tho now old in need of sleep
aside the fire where lone I keep
those dreams behind a fluttered lid
in wait of that which age has bid.

For night does let the earth lie still
amongst the heavenly good will
as comets soar the darkened sky
and lips then whisper why oh why.

As days do pass and leaves now fall
I’ll lie here love in wait our ball
where dreams shall lead as years do pass
and from our toast we raise life’s last.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-08-13 12:52 PM

Magnus~
My GAWD ... this is gorgeous !!

What a 'timeless' inspire~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2006-08-13 12:56 PM

Barry,
I wish you well in the sweep of the swell.

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-08-13 01:03 PM

add one more tear
to the ocean
which your words inspire.
and know
it is mine.

sandra

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-08-13 01:06 PM

Rendered so beautifully.
Love is timeless...it is changed and molded all along, but resilient to the end.
Someday, I hope to grow up and be like you!
Hugs,
TD

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-08-13 02:56 PM

Ah, you do so inspire and tickle the Muse...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-08-16 02:22 AM

BJ, I am truly impressed with how beautiful your poetry is.....sigh.....jo

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2006-08-16 11:07 AM

Barry...sometimes I just don't know how to reply...you are just so very!!!

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2006-08-16 11:10 AM

VERY well done, indeed!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2006-08-16 11:12 AM

reading you is like reading a tender book, one you can't put down, much less read another...very nice write

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2006-08-16 12:02 PM

sigh...

your words slow my world, Barry
make me dream

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2006-08-16 01:08 PM

I cannot find the words that would be worthy of such a write!

Mag-nificent!

Loving Light,
Linda

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