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The Dispised Vegetables
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The Dispised Vegetables |
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Sole Junior Member
since 2006-07-29
Posts 13England |
The rascals in society The hated, disliked and apparently not very colourful Un-motivated through life Working towards there bitter destiny Which compared to there upbringing Was a miracle in disguise They had it tough Going out everyday, all day, Rain, Wind or snow To try and do there bit Their rough up-rising Being watered, burnt and torn Just sitting, venerable just waiting to be stolen or abused. But to this day I still think That I’m the Top cabbage of the 29th row. _____________________________________________ Well i havnt written for a long time ive had a break from school. The poem title was reqested by a friend and i did my best to fulfil an image. By far not my best peice, lacks vocab but i cant really see any means of changing any words over. Please, any comments or views or if your a vegetable protester wantign to use my piece, please post :P Thanks in advance. Sole [This message has been edited by Sole (08-13-2006 08:57 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You might want to use spell check although it won't help you with the word Their or They're instead of there since it only corrects wrong spellings and not proper usage or homonyms... just a thought~~ M |
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