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Neeraja
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0 posted 2006-08-12 11:50 AM



WILL YOU…

It’s great to be with me
sharing all the fun
All my smiles for you
every day the sun

It’s heaven to be with me
on romantic nights
Plenty kisses shared
by simple candlelight

It’s fun to be with me
sharing many things
When love is in the air
carrying us on it’s wings

BUT…

Will you stay with me
when I shed my tears
Will you stay with me
when I face my fears

Will you put your arms around me
tell me it's alright
Will you hold me tightly
in my darkest night

Will you guide me through my pain
when no one else is there
And all the shadows in my life
will lead me to despair

Will you promise that you do
all these things for me
Because my love... I will do
the very same for you…



© Copyright 2006 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-08-12 12:15 PM


What man could refuse such an offer?!?

May he give as good as he gets!


EA

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-08-13 07:55 AM


Sometimes, m'friend, it only takes
this very question..."will you?"

Well done.


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-08-13 08:05 AM


beautiful and what more can one ask of another...


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Gaia
4 posted 2006-08-14 02:44 AM


Neeraja, may his answer be as true and heartfelt as your question, as your offer to be there for him.  
latearrival
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5 posted 2006-08-14 01:25 PM


Excellent. Too many are around for the fun and games and disapear when a frown appears. Enjoyed, martyjo
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-08-14 01:29 PM


You have the answer
it really begs the question
all you do is ask

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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