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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Two It is the two that sums the one In everything that is begun Opposition is the key Without it there is no we It’s the living force of rhyme Without it there is no time There is the night, there is the day It is that touch that makes the way The ego lives on touch and go It takes the two to make time flow Without the wall no echoes bounce There is no bounce without denounce The trick is to adjust the gage The turning of the future page You set the needle on exist Accept the factor of resist Take your walk within the park Be patient with the others bark |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, Mr poetry, sing a song for me Just a little rhyme to make me dance in ecstasy Loved this one Liz |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
So true... smile... nice read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I found a tiny rhyme of flow Within a bonny time ago It bobs a cork within my mind It’s always there for me to find A favor that you laced my seam A meeting that still seems a dream Neeraja Thank you for the sweet comment. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
.. and here is where you reached out and grabbed me! The ego lives on touch and go It takes the two to make time flow |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The ego lives on touch and go It takes the two to make time flow Without the wall no echoes bounce There is no bounce without denounce These are very neat to me... the entire poem is... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza Enjoyed your reply, thank you. Magnus Thank you my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the way you rhyme! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I love the way you reply.  |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Sy, you write so beautifully it always flows so perfectly and says so much I'm tempted sometimes to just pack up my pen after I read you 'cause I can't imagine ever being able to write so loverly as you do ... but i figure my muse would just pull it out and poke me in the eye or something  she's hateful like that ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sheli, It's all there just be patient.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Sy...this is so wise..one of my favorites!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You have made me happy. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Your poetry is always music to my ears. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick As are your replies. |
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