Open Poetry #38 |
Weeping Willow |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Weeping Willow Don’t weep on me Your shimmering tears hang Delicately balanced in spider webs Showering diamond drops To blanket the ground Caught in blades Of silken threads Captured in emerald nets Weeping Willow Don’t weep on me Hold close your tears To wear as ornaments Under the whispered moonlight Of the Midnight Parade. aziza |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aziza~ This gives me an entirely differnt perspective of the Willow~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I hope it is just a different perspective, but still good. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. xoxoxo aziza |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional imagery. Your perspective is refreshing. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
willows do have the tendency to weep on you sometimes very well written |
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