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aziza
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0 posted 2006-08-12 01:04 AM


Weeping Willow
Don’t weep on me
Your shimmering tears hang
Delicately balanced in spider webs
Showering diamond drops
To blanket the ground
Caught in blades
Of silken threads
Captured in emerald nets
Weeping Willow
Don’t weep on me
Hold close your tears
To wear as ornaments
Under the whispered moonlight
Of the Midnight Parade.

aziza

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1 posted 2006-08-12 04:31 PM


Aziza~
This gives me an entirely differnt perspective of the Willow~



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aziza
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2 posted 2006-08-12 04:42 PM


I hope it is just a different perspective, but still good.  Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

xoxoxo
aziza

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3 posted 2006-08-12 04:47 PM


Exceptional imagery.  Your perspective is refreshing.
TD

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4 posted 2006-08-12 05:20 PM


willows do have the tendency to weep on you sometimes

very well written

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