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. . . love's complex tangle
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. . . love's complex tangle |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
lying here entwined intricately disordered lovingly scrambled Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
i'm not sure i've ever commented on the little word gifts you leave behind when you visit the blue pages (I was busy throwing things) I read so many when I should be working and can't take the time to comment right then but I'm growing very fond of your work and find myself searching you out when I come to read  ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
passionate chaos wrapped up in each other's arms a beautiful mess |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sheli ~ your eyes caress me well, at least my work, that is which we both enjoy Susan ~ loving disorder enfolded in your embrace turmoil and bedlam Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Lovers tangle is Right where I most want to be Wrapped up in my work~  ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ such good work it is little tidbits of Tindal a lover of words Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
once again, you say so much with so few words...  I like |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Well done. LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper....sure sounds better than eggs! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want mornings like this... and evenings... and nights... and... yes!!! *G* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
LeeJ ~ I'm glad you enjoyed Sy ~ Thanx for the support! Martie ~ Gee, I never thought of adding eggs suthern ~ Yes, yes, and YES! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This sounds like a state of beauty that would be very nice to be in, and your economy of words make it an even better poem, each word considered before being chosen, thank you.... Goldenrose. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Time in its keeping Brings a smile to this poet Possibilities~ ***Edited by my own little self after a conscientious objector objected to the 'possibility' of my thoughts not fitting the rating for the Open Forums*** Thanks PiPReporter ... I'm gracious enough to respect most views, even if they differ from mine~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-12-2006 09:56 AM).] |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Nice haiku. Loved this. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Highest compliment I can pay you... You inspire! Forwarned Staring into the sun Only to see stars Wonderful style |
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