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divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

0 posted 2006-08-11 11:14 AM

While puttering
in my flower bed
Clods of dirt
held in my hands

I saw on the street,
a silver flash
your foot to the floor
you went by fast,

The dirt clods
shattered on the lawn
and I realized
I missed you

In the store
moving down the aisle
there you were,
that walk, that smile

canned corn went
crashing to the floor
and like so many times before,
I missed you

Several times I have been tempted
To sit and write a letter
to let you know I've missed you

~but~

my aim is getting better.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-08-11 11:16 AM

Big grins here

Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

2 posted 2006-08-11 11:17 AM

*grins*

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2006-08-11 11:25 AM

Keep on practicing.
He makes a big assed target.

Here, batter, batter, batter!

Love you lots.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

4 posted 2006-08-11 11:26 AM

*laughs merrily*
that he does, darlin,
that he does

Practice makes perfect ..
I used to be a sharpshooter, ya know

*grins*
~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2006-08-11 01:28 PM

divine chaos
Big smiles.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

6 posted 2006-08-11 06:49 PM

Sheli,

This is great. Aim isn't everything though...

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

7 posted 2006-08-11 10:51 PM

Sy, happy to make you smile

Kristabell -- aim isn't everything? I suppose this is true .. I could use grenades, then "almost" would be good enough *laughs*

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2006-08-12 02:53 PM

This poem has so much "feel" to it....
A treat to read and savor...

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