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While Echoes
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While Echoes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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While Echoes While echoes wail their nightly song And chasing shadows chase along My psyche rides an agile horse While I patrol a fragile course I skirt about the memory trees Push aside those hanging leaves Search the meadows sign and move And fix my lance a likely groove The forest is my fantasy Illusions not reality But phantoms play a subtle part Of all the awe in living art That’s right it’s I a part the mist To season up my brew of gist Bringing me a better coup To face the doing of the do And so my ego rides the tide While wash of sands spill times abide |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, Sy  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Fantastic Seymour. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I skirt about the memory trees Push aside those hanging leaves' YOU ... yes, YOU ... are a dynamic read ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
This is just fantastic, Sy I have such poem envy right now ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper My humble thank you. SmartChick Fantastic elastic.  Marge, Can't tell you how much I enjoy your replies.  Sheli, Flattery will get you everywhere. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is a good one. "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kristabell Thank you so much. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Imaginations eye is my forest and glen...sometimes even my when...sure do understand. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Love ya sweety. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
You've made me cry. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So lovely. I enjoy your poetry so much. aziza |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Seymour. It's always a pleasure to dance through your words. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
seraphin Sorry about that,but thank you anyway. aziza Your comments make me happy. Honeybunch And always a pleasure to see your reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written so many wonderful poems... and this might well be my favorite. *S* Absolutely lovely!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweety, love you too. |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Inspiring stuff, Seymour. Your words are so subtly evocative, and as captivating as ever. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
quell Great comment, thank you my friend. |
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