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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
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0 posted 2006-08-11 03:47 AM


i can still hear the echo of my breaking heart
and still feel the peices crumble as its falling apart
i hate how i cant forget you, and love it all at once
all the memories i keep of how my hopes were quickly crushed
Easily you let me down, "Its the distance." you said
gazing into your circles of brown, i try to see the thoughts in your head.
They never blinked so i hope it was the truth
because ive had my share of cold faced liars and taken the abuse

from the moment i saw you, there was something about
the way you carried yourself as to say always,
"i have no doubt."
we drew eachother in and everyone could see the connection
gossip started up as if in some sort of election
still we stayed true to always speaking the truth
but now your gone and there's no use

memories can never add up to the real deal. they're just a glimpse of the past that seem so unreal.
just bits and peices of whats said and done. they beat me down til all thoughts go numb.

As i write this (of course) my thoughts go out to you.please remember the small talks and emotions we went through (hopefuly they werent one sided)  

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

© Copyright 2006 Jamison - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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1 posted 2006-08-11 09:24 AM


I enjoyed this, Good write

Cheers,
Jess

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2 posted 2006-08-11 11:43 AM


Jamison~

Very, very enjoyable read ... WELCOME to PiP~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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