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rainbow dancing lights and star dancing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Dancing underneath the stars, spinning in the thin 'round and round and round and back again rainbow dancing lights in surround sound twirl me, swirl about the clouded thoughts within me sending me free falling to the ground where I am found embracing stormy seas... I drown, ebbing in emotional waves, cresting thoughts held close to breast, carefully covered in moon beams sent to make me rest while fireflies glow, dance themselves into a trance of nature’s screams, hidden things, things of the night the daylight cannot fathom and so again tonight at midnight I'll dance within starlight and a moonbeam’s glow, let it spin me into the thin spaces beyond |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
but the snozzberries WILL still taste like snozzberries! and nobody can take that away from us lovie lickable wallpaper here slurp  and we really should meet at a coffeeshop sometime, yanno? |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
midnight you have inspired a poem that i am soon to write after this post, it will be dedicated to you. thank you for this write, this time you are my muse  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Karen, lol, howz about along the rocky Oregon coast? grin, snozzberries, eh?  mute? oh my, are you tryin to make me cry?  I am looking forward to reading your inspire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kacy, superbly painted....you put it right in front of me.... |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
I love the dreaminess of this. Most especailly, the first Stanza! Will |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
this reminds me so much of the kind of poems my friend in Ohio writes, so your words touched a heart here a poet who cares |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"swirl about the clouded thoughts within me sending me free falling to the ground where I am found embracing stormy seas... I drown, ebbing in emotional waves, cresting thoughts held close to breast, carefully covered in moon beams sent to make me rest while fireflies glow, dance themselves into a trance of nature’s screams, hidden things, things of the night the daylight cannot fathom" I know, it's almost the whole poem...  but this is the part I liked best...awesomely awesome |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ I so enjoy this element of your writing skills~  You have a plethora of inkwells for thought-dipping to share ... thank you for doing so~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful Kacy! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~N ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Silverspun cotton candy.... thank you! |
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