Open Poetry #38 |
scent of night games |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Your silent glance utters skin ripples exploding on a threshold burning fierce like dramatic membranes of context intoxicated cartoons crowd my thoughts drooling in this muted room “keep reading” words are slow pleasant torture woman fears advance to psalms of interpretation I no longer can sustain this playbill mind journey to powerful I know you might be breathing sinking sinking into pulse but oh, I so love the intensity of this orange lake where fireflies know wind from whence it blows passing out a fixated by the lingering sound of you skipping stones of summer’s womb does this exaggeration numb your lips on mine? can you feel me close melting memory of a dying way of life reincarnating the feel of immortality you touch me with blue sky ways spiritual reflections late at night there you are in the panic room of flawless memory heart filled anthropologist of kindness anticipation to thirst waning misfortune sneaking through madness eating my signature scribbling passion on paper thin skin forbidden summon rendezvous where we see mountains in the distance I know you do drifting through air into our feeding frenzied fingers beneath moss of silence lay truth about time dripping drug of love lavendar & thyme I want to live forever in your soul where heaven’s eyes are constant Glad your home tonight in Philadelphia you, scent of night games [This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-10-2006 10:03 AM).] |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Whew ! Ok... First, I am going to take a cool dip in the creek. Then, I am coming back...printing this out...and carrying it in my wallet. ::smiles:: Me likes! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"Encore!" as she cheers, and from heat the walls expand! This has got to be one of my all time, anywhere favorite poetic excursions! I've always admired your unique pairing of words and image, but I really like the sheer quality of this. Chiffon, this is! misc |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, my first read-through of your poems, is done by spead-reading! I devour your images and your flights of imagination! ~ Then I go back and read them slowly ~ savoring every word! :pigtail: Loveya! Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
passionately perfect! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ There have been times within your poetry, where I have been lost in the slide of your thoughts, but this...this...caught me with something delicious and I savored every single drop of you!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I was lost in sensation. Your words are a wonderful place to be lost. You kind of swept me along with you. aziza |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when you wear that gauzy gown on your pen you are sinful enjoyed it |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
... just .. wow! I'm with 'ziza .. I love getting lost in your words, Lee ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fantastic write LeeJ! |
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