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poem with a face |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Whatya up to unpromising poem cerebral salad sporting a calculus of moments on this one sided trail oh playful distractions speaking in tongues how all bunched up in crisp attitude you are tackling my accomplishments with sense of mystery howls and humor with cheeks never glancing at the clock selected gauntlet with flashy tricks knowing emotional success soap opera kitchen how slightly larger then life you are dear poem with desire to be seen in human form self reinventing layers of frothing ocean being kind to youth sometimes clotted to the second half of my life how digging latrines voice real world experience dying & living living & dying at the same time immortality in desires oh poem, of imaginative conditions how heaven sent, you are when out of nowhere you discharge like a violent manic episode or a book in this poet’s house a violin sonnet of things that feel on a first name basis oh poem, how shall i place every gem on my journey is it a conviction to your reincarnation a self-dialogued story of many sisters whispering feathered God murmurs that I know nothing of do you feel the store of wanton rejection my physic spiritual life with a complexion the sense of smell the smell of blush and perfection oh poem selling herbs of intellectual and silly bankrupt things are you the partner who stole my assets the one who eludes ordinary thought teaching me the value of patience of humbleness straight forwardness sorting out anthems of reinvention for another time another year another death hey there poem, whataya up to [This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-10-2006 09:28 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lee, Ah, the roller coaster of penning poetry. Well done.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I believe it is all of those things... Marvelous penning, Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"are you the partner who stole my assets" I smiled my way through this one, and even laughed, especially at the above. BRAVO on this delightful poem, dear friend Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"the one who eludes ordinary thought" ~*~ Well writ! I love it! More! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ Your 'poem with a face' ... put a smile on mine~ 'oh poem selling herbs of intellectual and silly bankrupt things are you the partner who stole my assets the one who eludes ordinary thought' Yup ! My favorite part~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
oh poem, of imaginative conditions how heaven sent, you are when out of nowhere you discharge like a violent manic episode or a book in this poet’s house a violin sonnet of things that feel on a first name basis ~*~ heaven sent, indeed...and now and then a little devilment sneaks through... and then... yes and then.  Thank you for this shot in the arm. |
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