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Bed and Breakfast |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia 
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Hammock in the breeze A black fly drifts off to sleep Spider tucks him in * |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! wow! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, this really took me by surprise... well done |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Masterfully done! MORE! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved it... not the flies or spiders but the poem and the title  M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... and OUCH! *G* This is great!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
love it Uriah! |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
Yes! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LOL! i didn't expect that one! very creative! hugs, g "Home..is for free expression, not for good impression..." |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
XOx, Very, very clever netting, woven from a hammock to a bug! A master's in creativity! misc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Uriah, That is the catch of the day. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
hehe, this is humourous. short and catchy  enjoyed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A powerhouse of a senryu - very clever....you're soooooooo good at these! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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