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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-08-08 02:41 PM


Saturday

again I take the boat
the one that bears my name
“The Lady” carrying the lady
to drown my tears in salt
August sun pulls me low
close to the mangroves
where water clear and thin
shows its silver jewels
dangling below the surface
I am at peace here
where freckles burn slow
and blue crabs run free
away from speeding fiberglass
scampering to chicken legs
tightly tied to underwater nets
how I love the bay to forget
rich with the sparkling of
floating southern diamonds
for miles all I can see
is the endless water
and that is where I am
totally at home
alone but not lonely


just some words cut from
the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2006 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2006-08-08 04:03 PM


Helen,
Sometimes we just need that. Nicely done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2006-08-08 05:18 PM


alone but not lonely...my feelings exactly...I love the ocean or bay but I spent my alone in the yard in the warmth of the sun today.

sometimes we need that

M

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3 posted 2006-08-09 09:11 AM


We all need such places... such times. *S* Beautiful write~!
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