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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-08-08 12:10 PM


I Know Lonely

I know lonely.
It is an aching feeling
that settles
below my breast.
It is that a dull ache
I sometimes feel
when with you.
I know lonely.
It is understanding
that this time
is not my time;
as I know that
my time will return
I know lonely.
It is missing you
when talking to you.
It wishing for you
when you are here.
I know lonely.
She is my new
best friend.

aziza

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artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
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south africa
1 posted 2006-08-08 12:33 PM


a sad poem of more depth than it suggests, are we lonely even in a crowded room? lonliness a terrable place to be, thank you, for sharing this.
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-08-08 12:37 PM


Thank you for reading
and understanding, artexeres.

aziza

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-08-08 12:42 PM




sad and beautiful
aziza...
most vulnerable

I enjoyed it greatly...


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2006-08-08 02:09 AM


so understood
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