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Emotional Bullet
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Emotional Bullet |
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Sad_In_Havok712 New Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 2 |
Emotional bullet Emotional bullet to the brain Descenting quickly,Becoming insane Facing reality, No more dreams The whole world fell apart at the seams.... Your enemy, is Your own master The ruler of this chaotic Disaster Bang Bang, Such a loud noise The victim of such fantasy toys Face the facts, and live life stone sour even in the darkest hour Dead on arrival, is what they said Deal with it your Friend is dead... This is a poem I wrote when one of my best friends died... I wrote it when the reality hit me... I will never see him again... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sad~ Welcome to PiP~ There is such poignancy to your thoughts~ Thank you for sharing the sad inspire for your piece~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Firstly, welcome to pip. The title of your work hits home for far too many. The body of your work, even more so. You did a fantastic job on this. It took courage to write, and I applaud you. Sandra |
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Beau de L'air Member
since 2006-08-03
Posts 105Middlesex, England |
How come I never got a huglet from Margelet? I feel swindled! "Bang bang , such a noise........toys " are good lines. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
*bump* Firstly,walk to pip Sad_in_Havok712. I really found your piece touching and written well. Sorry for what happenned to you and your b/f. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"The victim of such fantasy toys" there is too much of that today... Welcome~~ M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The whole world fell apart at the seams.... It does that... and you wrote the meltdown well! *S* Welcome to Passions! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the reality of today is this happens to often...and I'm so sorry to read that this was something you experienced..so sorry...  this write should go out to the world to see. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome. I hope your future work will be a little on the lighter side  |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
there i read your poem b/c you told me too and now im glad idid i really liked it im sorry you lost your best friend it hurts a lot.......lucky for me im only losing my best friend for a year......i will look out for more of your poems....good write.... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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