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"I'll Miss You"
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"I'll Miss You" |
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WildHorses Junior Member
since 2006-08-05
Posts 11Rocky Mountains |
"I'll Miss You" I'll miss your dancing eyes Upon each given day The way they change their color From brown to green to gray I'll miss your lighted smile Though it will always warm my heart Each moment that I will think of you Even though we'll be apart I'll miss your tender lips And the way they felt on mine Your kisses will be remembered Throughout the end of time I'll miss your gentle hands And the way they pulled me close Powerful are your hands They kept me safe and gave me hope I'll miss your breath on me each morning And your voice speaking my name Words of love and words of comfort Never again will be the same I'll miss you heartbeat next to mine Each night when I'm asleep Not only will tears fall from my eyes My heart too will weep I'll miss your every dream Praying all of them come true I'll miss holding you your lifetime Though I will never stop loving you I'll miss you..... ©Melissa Joy I do miss you already, bear. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely, warm, endearing write~~ M |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I echo the above, lovely indeed. |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
 Wildhorses, I sure do like your poems. I think you will get better the more you write. If you stop writing and leave piptalk Forums I'll Miss You. Dave |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms melj, your soul is open window'd...enjoyed reading this one |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
precious and heartfelt feelings... |
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