Open Poetry #38 |
Unconditional Love in bunches |
FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Oh so little they appear. Genuine laughs and gestures adheres, to their innately naviety. Oh so little they appear In bulks and giants, their love conquers, the sadness in life, disappointments and fear. Oh so little they appear. Playing tugs and wars, with super-hero gears. Fighting greys and shadows, Amidst the wallows of other older fellows. Oh so little they appear. Like little Precious gems and stones. Sometimes its not easy to spot gems. Im fortunate to be surounded by lots of these bundle of joys. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FNG~ So totally precious indeed ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Indeed precious gems! Just as this write is! Hugs~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
me to, there are many gems in the world...to off set the not so nice gems.... lovely poem |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
We should learn from the little ones who live in the 'now' void of yesterdays mistakes and tomorrows unknown encumberances. Little ones are quick to forgive and unafraid to love. This writing is delight. Rae |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem. I, too, am surrounded by these gems. Hugs, Ethel |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
phew a thought provoker, i got a message about our children these great gifts from G-D, who are on loan to us, as our lives are too are on loan. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Dear all, Thanks for reading and sharing my sentiments sandgrain - indeed, they are quick to forgive and forget. LeeJ - YES! they offset unhappiness in life garygirl - glad you are having them around to make your life happier! artexeres - i like how you put it. they are on loan to us. hope i will not take them for granted enchantress - Thanks for your kind words. Marge - It's always nice to see your poetry. they inspires me |
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