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FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-08-07 08:14 AM

I stitched my heart,
With minute hair line cracks,
left by you,

As momentos,
Witness of our failed Love.

It Defaced my heart,
As much as the sorrow
prints on my face.

I refused to look,
straight in my face.
It leads my mind to stray,
reminds me of a familiar face.

You appeared again.
You removed my stitches,
Caused it to bleed.

Please...
Leave....
I plea...

I have to start to stitch.

[This message has been edited by FNG (08-08-2006 12:58 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-07 08:16 AM

I know the feeling, deeply imbued, but, upon the day of realization, you seem to be thankful for the view, for everything you experienced, expecially the love you felt...we learn and live again...

Hugs for a heart wrenching poem

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

2 posted 2006-08-07 08:20 AM

Im trying hard. Thanks for the hugs

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2006-08-07 08:29 AM

I put a zipper there
they can just unzip
and get the blood
then I zip it back up

seems to work
for now at least

enjoyed your work

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-08-07 08:31 AM

I hate when that happens

been there, done it... too many times

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

5 posted 2006-08-07 08:34 AM

Thanks for sharing Dark stranger and Passing shadows,

I appreciate your kind words.

Much consoled...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-08-07 09:18 AM

WOW! I know this feeling...from long ago thank goodness!
A most excellent write.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

7 posted 2006-08-08 12:01 PM

This hurt to read, but I loved the 'sorrow prints' -- that is a beautiful expression. I am sure it will linger with me next time they cross my face -

aziza

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

8 posted 2006-08-08 12:57 PM

Hi Enchantress and aziza,

thanks for dropping by

and leaving kind words here.

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