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Open Poetry #38

what makes a Man

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-08-07 08:03 AM

Doors held ajar,
for the sweet lady Jane?

Paying bills for champaign.
Parade the cultery,
on glistening plane.
Adorned with refined British manners.

But what really matters?

A heart of truth.
For love is a facade without.

How to look through and through,
to find a man that stands the test of truth?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-07 08:10 AM

yes indeed, and also a religion of sorts, to walk the straight and narrow...with heart free

wonderful write

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

2 posted 2006-08-07 08:15 AM

Thanks for reading LeeJ.

I really think a fine man is one that resembles the manner of God.

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

3 posted 2006-08-07 03:13 PM

a heart of truth, is always found within, always expect a perfect gentleman, for are all woman not worth this, i know that they are. a very nice read, questioning the values of a decrepid society, that has lost it's way and are they not like children, that cannot find there way home? thank you lets see more

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