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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-08-06 02:50 AM


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Enlightened Hearts

05 August 2006


When two hearts meet across a universe
when those hearts beat in a rhythm as one
Words only words, those of a poet to seek
those words, whispering of love
this love and the desire to seek

When two hearts climb
that ladder of love
And both meet on the wing
those words of love
both hearts do sing

For could it be love
an effect stolen over time
When clocks bare another name
this was love, or just a word in rhyme

When two hearts, unite to pray
and their words are in unison borne
Would this be true to endure
an enlightenment to understand
of two hearts, across a universe pure


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2006-08-06 02:54 AM


This Is great
A nice write

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
2 posted 2006-08-06 04:13 AM


I have read your posts sooooo many times and have never commented.   I apologize for that.
Your words are always enjoyed, but this one will not allow me to slip silently away.

Wonderful write, Mr. Herbert !

artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 156
south africa
3 posted 2006-08-06 06:16 AM


When the duelaliy of love becomes unified and love, wings it way to the very crevices of your heart, when love becomes your great discourse. well done, on a super read.
poettothecars
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4 posted 2006-08-06 03:24 PM


Thank you all for your kind words

a poet who cares

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