Open Poetry #38 |
Enlightened Hearts |
poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
5588 Enlightened Hearts 05 August 2006 When two hearts meet across a universe when those hearts beat in a rhythm as one Words only words, those of a poet to seek those words, whispering of love this love and the desire to seek When two hearts climb that ladder of love And both meet on the wing those words of love both hearts do sing For could it be love an effect stolen over time When clocks bare another name this was love, or just a word in rhyme When two hearts, unite to pray and their words are in unison borne Would this be true to endure an enlightenment to understand of two hearts, across a universe pure © 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet) a poet who cares |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
This Is great A nice write |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I have read your posts sooooo many times and have never commented. I apologize for that. Your words are always enjoyed, but this one will not allow me to slip silently away. Wonderful write, Mr. Herbert ! |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
When the duelaliy of love becomes unified and love, wings it way to the very crevices of your heart, when love becomes your great discourse. well done, on a super read. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Thank you all for your kind words a poet who cares |
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