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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-08-05 03:24 PM


                             if i were your Irish Spring

would your spring into my arms

                          don't worry, there's no harm

in cooling off.   i've got plenty of spring water on my farm

                but last spring you had me alarmed

when you ran away after i suggested that my wedding ring  at the end of your arm

could be the lucky charm

                                        you're missing



                                                                             love,

                                                                             howard



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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
Posts 54
TENN
1 posted 2006-08-06 05:46 PM


WOW...  that seems to be my only word to describe that. That has immediately became one of my fav's. keep it up.


howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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2 posted 2006-08-08 01:29 PM


thanks droppinginsideout
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