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Open Poetry #38

A Clear Minds Eye

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-08-05 01:13 PM

Silence in the back of a room’s corner
Constant words in back the observing mind
Conversations end with silence in time
Somehow learning from dying leaf border
Rotten quickly from the inside out
Now soon to death and dust in wind away
Its spirit escapes, the shell to the earth
Life itself all around me exquisite
The collective life of the universe
In energy, matter, cells and minds eyes
Seen through glasses of wine and dancing smoke
Found in the silent mouths with racing minds
Sight is seen because of mind the clearer
Making distant thoughts the ever nearer

I am the two-toed wanderer

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-08-05 08:37 PM

nice flow of conscious thoughts
mingled with those tiny brilliant bursts
from the nether lands

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-08-06 12:06 PM

Very cohesive. You have a great ability, I hope you recognize that.

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