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Open Poetry #38
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Ella Blue
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0 posted 2006-05-26 03:12 AM

Boots, (waffle stompers) crunch on gravel, solid, safe.
Course woolen shirts infused with the scent of fire
Richly timbered laughter, operetic in melody, cresendoes then swirls away.
Mallow, burnt black and foul with sweetness, bursts in our mouths.
Strange scurrying sounds bring us closer to the circle of knees,
and we watch, our faces already red with high air, cook by the flames.
We retire, but lanterns illuminate too much.
Shadows on vinyl, umfathomeable in their shapeshifting, deny us slumber.
© Copyright 2006 Ella Blue - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-05-26 07:33 AM


Ella, Welcome to Passions!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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2 posted 2006-05-26 09:09 AM

Ella~
Welcome to these pages blue~

This reads like a GREAT camping trip~

Enjoy your stay in this circle of poetic friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2006-05-26 10:43 AM

">Please, check your email for a  special greeting...WELCOME hope you enjoy your time here...
Greeneyes~

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-05-26 09:44 PM


I love this!
Oh, I can taste that burnt mallow now,
and can see those dancing mysteries.
WELCOME!
I really enjoyed your first post!
Magnus
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5 posted 2006-05-26 10:14 PM

Welcome to Passions,  I'm getting my tent...
let's go!
Will Rhyme
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6 posted 2006-05-26 11:09 PM

I've been there !

As  A child.

Wonderfull Ella, and, Welcome.

Will
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7 posted 2006-06-02 11:56 PM



"Mallow, burnt black and foul with sweetness, bursts in our mouths"

Oh that taste conjures up many wonderful
nights. Well done Ella.

Welcome!
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