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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
I am a firefly Trapped at the bottom Of a glass jar Flashing a signal Help me Loose me Let me live My light grows dim A strong pair of hands Can free me |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Susie, this is really nice. I like it very much. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
intersting imagery...  enjoyed. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
beyond doubt the picture is there to be seen and felt within the words of the poem a poet who cares |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
safe behind the glass yet still wanting out enjoyed your art susieq |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful!! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
Dear SusieQ, There is a Quote by Charan Singh, Indian Mystic Have patience! In time, even grass becomes milk. That hand will find you and save you. Then both your lights will shine as one. Very good poem, very gentle poem about "save me" and you will be. Keep up the good work. Dave |
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