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artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 156
south africa

0 posted 2006-08-04 10:20 AM



          
Hey confused child
what
made you so sad?
Is it your mother or is it your dad?
Why is it that
you
just cannot connect,
Is it because of their
lies
that you choose to deselect?
Regards your child hood
you
try hard to forget
All your complexities
you
haven’t learned yet.
You keep running from
love
and hiding from the truth
Hey confused child
why
is life is so aloof.
Hey confused child
what
made you so sad?
Is this reflection
of
life really so bad
Is it because there is
no one
to hold your hand?
Or is it because you
just
don’t fit into their plan
Is he meant to be a
father
or just another man
Is she meant to be a
mother
or just another mam
Hey confused child is
this
the way since the pram
Was this life given us
meant
to be such a sham
Is that why so many
end up
doing time in the can
Hey confused child
why
is life so aloof
Or is it the lack of
love
that really is the final proof?

if it is going to be it is up to me i choose my destiny

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-08-04 10:46 AM


Good questions that may contain good answers
artexeres
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2 posted 2006-08-04 10:55 AM


thank you, as to the asking of questions he enquired and enquired
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-08-04 05:12 PM



very interesting work
artexeres

Kristabell
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4 posted 2006-08-04 06:25 PM


This certainly makes the mind wander. Intriguing write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
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5 posted 2006-08-05 05:38 PM


thank you both very much for you time and kind comments, i am glad you liked.
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