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Not for Dawn, but Dusk
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Not for Dawn, but Dusk |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR 
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Inner trembling, A speedy process, Constant and swimming, Sheathed in many forgings, Straining against a promise made For a period of waiting, Fighting ferociously for the coming Of the dawn. Crazy notions, Insane ideals, Falling falling… With such fear, The knowing of it Does not change a promise Once made by …Ignorance… Though love still blooms, …Faith… Still must grow. Inside trembling In fear of the cost, Losing it… him before the unknown abyss, a cheater true, but body cowers when faced with genuine forgiveness, love, Loss waits On both sides thus, Waiting commences Not for dawn, But dusk. "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Kristabell! You are as pretty as a picture!  With "genuine forgiveness, and love", you can face any "unknown abyss". I felt the emotions that you expressed. Well done! Loving Light, EA |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Thanks so much EA. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding piece of work! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fighting ferociously for the coming Of the dawn. Crazy notions, Insane ideals, ~*~ Amen for the dreams we awake from, yet left wanting more... |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
I understand how you feel. |
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