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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-05-25 10:30 PM

A woman’s mind is guardian of secret passages
Silently, each soft syllable changes its shade on her face
The enchantment of twin entities; dusk and dawn
Sparkle on the surface of her own beach-washed soul

Private moments are invested in disposition of seasons
Keeping summer, an easy does it glow
For him, yes…for him…and for herself
Settling her wings of opal span on degrees of certainty

A woman’s sight is clear, of a delight that’s sheer
Her favorite mirror; but his eyes
Undoubtedly, the scent of lavender steams his achy bones
Her purest treasure just his touch

For what he has, or has not is the mirage of fools
In fact, to hold each other, all of heaven bathes the earth
Slipping down a satin gown, in want of only him
With perfume on her wrists

Copyright Kkh 5/24/06

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-25 11:15 PM

What a beautiful sensuous write.
I do love your style!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-05-27 07:18 PM

A woman’s mind is guardian of secret passages
Silently, each soft syllable changes its shade on her face

No takers on challenging this thought.

Nicely done K. You do have a way of saying
so many things...in a hundred different
ways.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-05-27 07:21 PM

Gosh TD....such a sensual, sensory pleasing treasure this is!!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2006-05-27 08:54 PM

This is a sensual stunner

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

5 posted 2006-06-29 10:31 AM

This is a beautiful sensuous write; one of your Best I think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Serena
Junior Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 47

6 posted 2006-06-29 12:00 PM

Very nicely written

I really loved the last two lines, they pulled this sensual poem together very well.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2006-06-29 01:57 PM

So softly sensual Kathleen.
Happy Birthday sweet lady~
Hugs and best wishes, Nancy.

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2006-06-29 02:11 PM

Wow!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2006-06-29 02:15 PM

and double WOW !!

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2006-06-29 02:24 PM

this was enchanting...especially enjoyed this...

Private moments are invested in disposition of seasons
Keeping summer, an easy does it glow
For him, yes…for him…and for herself
Settling her wings of opal span on degrees of certainty

how beautifully woven

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2006-06-29 04:52 PM

Thank you all...for reading this poem, and thank you WW for bringing it up again. A special favorite of my own, and I'm glad to have shared it here.

Hugs,
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2006-06-29 07:28 PM

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