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Open Poetry #38

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themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-05-25 07:31 PM

What is it I carry within my arms?
Is it some unguided lame form of charms?
Yet do I not charm the mind so well?
And so too, to eyes I do torture sell
So for this then I am so called tempting
But the lady halts her loves attempting
She sees me all save but my tender heart
Which feels so much to rip the earth apart
A love so vast as the endless deep hole
Let us both jump into the human soul
And be immersed in total seclusion
And live the dive with no seen conclusion
Loves not seen or heard from words but both
To take the plunge takes such true lasting oath

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-05-25 10:36 PM

The passion of this is clear and resonant.
TD

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