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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2006-08-03 07:29 AM


Tap-tap, knock-knock, bang-bang,
the forerunners to a good scream,
retire to the shade of an old oak tree
and make as if dead in the dirt
for life has supped on intense energy
and broken the bones of the matter.  

Beckon they do to a harboured scream
but this just a tool with no point
can’t access the will to rent the air
for lack of desired outcomes
and so the door, the heart of it all,
stands still as an oaf smug and secure
in the knowledge of own importance.

But behind, behind, love lies behind
that solid and staid façade
or is it inside, deep, deep, inside
the core of the once alive
because I believe (unless I’m deceived)
there’s always a push for the better
building up muscle and need
to allow me, allow me, my dream!

Helen / 3 August 2006


© Copyright 2006 Helen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2006-08-03 09:09 AM


wonderful!! I loved the middle stanza and the last lines especially
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-08-03 11:45 AM


Dream on, sweet honey! A delightful read from your dreamily delightful pen!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

the quell
Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144
Liverpool, UK
3 posted 2006-08-03 11:59 AM


Wow; very powerful stuff. And quite enigmatic (by which I mean I didn't fully understand it, but that's my lack of wit at work) I enjoyed much

They aren't flaps; they're my face!
                           - The Mighty Boosh

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