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Oh, good golly
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Oh, good golly |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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(Just a "vent") Oh, good golly, good Molly, these times won't set me free instead impale true womanhood to the same old money tree with glee at my aversion to its rough and bumpy bark. It’s thought to be a suffering and a means to make me beg but in the scheme of life and things just a mountain to be climbed by my determination to one day live again. But there, over there, where the bluebird always sings the place for all I’ve come to be waits in agonizing silence for my overdue homecoming. It’s enough to sever nerve ends and snap each vertebrae that carries to the mind and heart love’s untainted energy but there’s always a tomorrow written into wishful thoughts … and there confined I read until once again asleep to my reality. Oh, good golly, good Molly, I hear but cannot see that sly and most elusive bluebird of happiness! Helen / 2 August 2006 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Helen, I like this...it sits well with me today |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I like this especially these lines ************** It’s thought to be a suffering and a means to make me beg but in the scheme of life and things just a mountain to be climbed by my determination to one day live again. ************** nice work! ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhhh Good Golly, do you have any idea how good it is to read you again? vent anytime...anyway, anyhow, cuz your a marvelous read.... thank you |
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