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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I've stood on this corner Breeze and wind to man A little gentle for the girls They smile and understand Always courting couples Oh there they go again Wrestling time on Big Street More moisture than the rain I always wanted the sea side Get a little air My brother likes to spin But he is just hot air Mother's very subtle Likes to travel well They always welcome her approach And sometimes ring a bell Mother meets the country Some have called it hell Look at them trying It makes you cringe to tell I've seen more puff from my Uncle And he's been caught as well Still they slow the people down An island in their wake All I see is the girl's legs And for this I've got to wait |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Good Evening Dave, Your word art is truly wonderful to read. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
The very last 2 lines are witty in this satirical work. It gives one a chuckle...nice. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Liz...Carpe Diem |
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