Open Poetry #38 |
boucherie time (charcoal man and his lady) |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
quilt hanging on porch railin’ charcoal man knows no shadow hair lady no mess of he’ll be back red poutin’ lip bent to heart or pink shell toes gone only gone and the vague smell of anger some say her Papa drove his char right to the porch railin’ carried his doucette home to her princess shoes some say she walked the dusty river road barefoot again catfish wrapped around the warm rock of brogan wearing man from the boats it don matter his lady left charcoal man a bed gift congo wrapped warm waitin’ c'est tout |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
femme de péché dansant son dé...and a congo too...hmmmm now I am missin ol creole town, enjoyed it lady one |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
how I wish I could write as this. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
femmes fâchées...ahh Stranger, what you gonna do? thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it seraphin thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you so very much Karilea! I've enjoyed having you along. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wow |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I think she was very angry, Helen. All ladies understand that, yes? Thank you. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I can see them and I certainly can feel them. Now, I think I need them. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Take them aziza. Enjoy. Thank you so much for sticking with me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Brava! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh Nancy! Thank you so much! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful!!! wonderful!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you passing shadows. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Woweee! Magnifique! Kate and Cajun blended into a masterful and brilliant climax! - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Diana |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so Good!!!!!!!!!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Why, thank you Windwalker! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, she'd never go back to those princess shoes. I even know that. A |
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