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Open Poetry #38

Is There?

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2006-07-31 04:55 PM

Is there anything greater
than this?

A moment realized of the
self.

I am nothing more than the spread of all
things in completion.

Run your fingers slight across
your chest.

And I am touched, as well as fully the
caress.

Is there anything greater than
this?

Of who I am....of whom
you are?

Speak soft,

And I will taste the answer on
your lips.

Is there anything greater...than
this?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-07-31 06:58 PM

There is.

The promise/hope/realization
it will happen again.

Welcome back, Ericc.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-07-31 07:01 PM

you've been missed

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2006-08-01 01:48 AM

Beautiful words as usual, Eric, and Sunshine is so right. Continuation of the great must really be "the greatest"!

davidmerriman
Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 123
Dallas, TX

4 posted 2006-08-01 03:24 AM

I am nothing more than the spread of all
things in completion.

the line that stuck out. i'd try a poem running off of this.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-08-01 09:17 AM

As always Eric...so very beautiful!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

6 posted 2006-08-01 09:55 AM

Your words show true depth.

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

7 posted 2006-08-01 10:17 AM

when a person sees this great unity and they have become all things what dellusion or sorror could ever be near them a nice poem thank you

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