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Remember me |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And as we part in temporary ways. Remember me only with your senses. Taste me near with parted lips and breathe my scent across your borders. I will come to you. Spread your fingers to the night and I will sweep your hand as distance. Hear my voice in silent notes captured by the breeze. And I will sing you closer. Hold me with your sight as I fall against the daybreak. I will bring to you the new morning. Remember me...in the depth of all your senses. I will come to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc It has a light quality, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I remember you!  ~ and your poem was worth the wait! It's been awhile! Linda  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Another lovely "Eric write" - thank you. One has to be very sensitive to know of the remembering but it certainly is possible. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes...I remember you well. Beautiful Eric...incredibly outstanding. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you always write so unbearably romantic, it touches the heart so sweety, so beautifully...and evokes the deepest of sighs..  |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Brilliant words I like the early dawn as well Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah what a reminder *sigh* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Eric, you do have a way of painting some of the most beautiful images... Thank You |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful write, dear Eric! Remembering you when dewdrops glisten at dawn mirroring your soul I love you. Margherita  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*Sighs* how could she not remember you.....This is beautiful, so soft and airy to read.....like the words of a soulmate beckoning his lover back to him in the next life.  I'm saving this~Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
GORGEOUS! as usual, you lifted my spirits with fine thoughts and writing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 ok.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
how could you not be remembered |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely write, Eric M |
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lost4dm New Member
since 2006-05-28
Posts 6Louisiana, USA |
Stirred my senses! Very beautiful. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
so beautiful..so good to read you....you have a way with romance like no other.... And so it those we live with |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc "Hold me with your sight as I fall against the daybreak. I will bring to you the new morning." How perfectly lovely! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Remember me...in the depth of all your senses. I will come to you. Oh, yes... this is so beautiful... a plea so perfect it hurts to breathe it in. *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like the warmth in this one! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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