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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-07-30 01:36 PM



I could not
turn the dark away
  so
I let it embrace me
becoming a coverlet
for all things
that don't seem to go right
  A brief peek
into the blinding light of truth
causes me to retreat
in return to the blackness
that has centered itself
as my mantra
  of comfort
when things don't work out
the way I would like them to do
  If onlys have a way
of taking my thoughts
for a long walk
  toward light
  Maybe
I'll get there yet~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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Billy_tha_Kidd
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1 posted 2006-07-30 01:45 PM


fresh n original olden topic  well done
Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2006-07-30 01:49 PM


Deep, beautiful words my dear friend, hope this isn't about you and hope all is well with you and yours

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-07-30 02:07 PM



We have to know
both sides
to appreciate
either.




Martie
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4 posted 2006-07-30 07:33 PM


Marge/sis...I love it when you write like this!!  
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5 posted 2006-07-30 07:39 PM


WOW!!! Most excellent Marge.
Hugs~Nancy

Thomas119gold
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6 posted 2006-07-30 10:57 PM


TWO THUMBS UP!
aziza
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7 posted 2006-07-31 01:04 AM


Sometimes the dark can be a comforting coverlet.
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8 posted 2006-07-31 08:50 AM


It can be a long dark walk...but if there is a friend to hold a light for you...and you for them....

A poetic excursion for our Marge...well done, dear lady! Love and light and beauty are are more your colors than dark chasms and despair....but basic black becomes you too...or you, it.

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Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2006-07-31 08:55 AM



Thank you all for letting me share a little splashing of dark ink~

Ed~
I don the black strapless ink-dress
because you challenge me to reach beyond
my familiarity with the light~
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com       

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2006-10-03 09:10 AM



This one calls my name today ... still in ????

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

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11 posted 2006-10-03 11:12 AM


"  If onlys have a way
of taking my thoughts
for a long walk
  toward light
  Maybe
I'll get there yet~"

Oh I am sure you will dear Marge!

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