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froggy
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0 posted 2006-07-29 10:53 PM




Daydream

Standing at the window
coffee in hand
I heard your footsteps,voice
as you spoke to me.
Quickly turning I realized.....
It was only a dream.

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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seraphin
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1 posted 2006-07-29 11:36 PM


simple and sweet. I like this.
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-07-30 12:11 PM


succinct
excellent snapshot

froggy
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3 posted 2006-07-31 02:31 PM


Thank-you Ladies for the wonderful comments.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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